Low Poly Character - Curand Ethinor

"There is always someone who wants something of someone else's, especially in such a beautiful city. Thus that someone who wants something, has such a skill that the someone who owns something that someone wants is oblivious to the someone taking that something....essentially you being the initial someone, or leader of the some-people - have skills and an attitude I would be fortunate enough to get involved with."
            
            Curand's opening statement to the Nymphaea Guild in DaraFog

Curand is one of the Heroes of Losfar (our tabletop RPG game group), a satyr rogue from Eada who lead an escape from the country with his fellow satyrs.

Maybe too variable in detail? Thoughts?